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Wednesday, February 8, 2012

Королевна (Мельница) / Queen (Melnitsa)

I fell in love with this simple little tune, and the imagery in the song is just amazing (well, almost all of Melnitsa's songs are very rich in mysterious and charming images). The song is quite long. Like, really, really long. But I will try to work with it piece by piece.


Королевна (группа Мальница)



Я пел о богах, и пел о героях, о звоне клинков, и кровавых битвах; 
Покуда сокол мой был со мною, мне клекот его заменял молитвы. 
Но вот уже год, как он улетел - его унесла колдовская метель, 
Милого друга похитила вьюга, пришедшая из далеких земель. 
И сам не свой я с этих пор, и плачут, плачут в небе чайки; 
В тумане различит мой взор лишь очи цвета горечавки; 
Ах, видеть бы мне глазами сокола, и в воздух бы мне на крыльях сокола, 
В той чужой соколиной стране, да не во сне, а где-то около: 

Стань моей душою, птица, дай на время ветер в крылья, 
Каждую ночь полет мне снится - холодные фьорды, миля за милей; 
Шелком - твои рукава, королевна, белым вереском - вышиты горы, 
Знаю, что там никогда я не был, а если и был, то себе на горе; 
Если б вспомнить, что случилось не с тобой и не со мною, 
Я мечусь, как палый лист, и нет моей душе покоя; 
Ты платишь за песню полной луною, как иные платят звонкой монетой; 
В дальней стране, укрытой зимою, ты краше весны и пьянее лета: 

Просыпайся, королевна, надевай-ка оперенье, 
Полетим с тобой в ненастье - тонок лед твоих запястий; 
Шелком - твои рукава, королевна, златом-серебром - вышиты перья; 
Я смеюсь и взмываю в небо, я и сам в себя не верю: 

Подойди ко мне поближе, дай коснуться оперенья, 
Каждую ночь я горы вижу, каждое утро теряю зренье; 
Шелком - твои рукава, королевна, ясным месяцем - вышито небо, 
Унеси и меня, ветер северный, в те края, где боль и небыль; 
Как больно знать, что все случилось не с тобой и не со мною, 
Время не остановилось, чтоб в окно взглянуть резное; 
О тебе, моя радость, я мечтал ночами, но ты печали плащом одета, 
Я, конечно, еще спою на прощанье, но покину твой дом - с лучом рассвета. 

Где-то бродят твои сны, королевна; 
Далеко ли до весны в травах древних... 
Только повторять осталось - пара слов, какая малость - 
Просыпайся, королевна, надевай-ка оперенье... 

Мне ль не знать, что все случилось не с тобой и не со мною, 
Сердце ранит твоя милость, как стрела над тетивою; 
Ты платишь - за песню луною, как иные платят монетой, 
Я отдал бы все, чтобы быть с тобою, но, может, тебя и на свете нету... 
Ты платишь - за песню луною, как иные - монетой, 
Я отдал бы все, чтобы быть с тобою, но, может, тебя и на свете нету...



My "true to the text" translation

I sang about gods, I sang about heroes, about clanging metal and bloody battles,
But while my falcon was with me, it's cries were lovelier to me than a prayer.
But it has been a year since it flew away, a magic wind carried it away
The dearest friend was taken from me by the stormy wind that came from far-away lands.
And I have not been myself ever since, and the seagulls are crying, crying in the sky,
But in the fog my vision discerns only those eyes of the color of gentians.
Oh, if I could have the eyes of a falcon, oh, if I could soar like a falcon,
Toward that strange falcon land that is not just in my dreams, but somewhere near.

My bird, turn into my soul, send some wind into my wings for a short while -
Every night I dream of a flight, and of miles after miles of cold fjords.
Your sleeves are embroidered with silk, my queen, like the mountain sides are embroidered with heather,
I know I have never been there myself - or, if I have been there, then just to meet my sorrow.
If I could remember all that happened, but not to you and not to me....
And I flounce about, like a fallen leaf, and there is no peace in my soul.
You pay for my song with a full moon, like others pay with a golden coin,
In a far away land, sleeping under the snow, you are lovelier than Spring, you are lovelier than Spring, you are lovelier than Spring... and more intoxicating than Summer.

Wake up, my queen, put on your feathers,
Let's fly together into the storm - so fragile is the ice of your wrists.
Your sleeves are embroidered with silk, my queen, like your feathers are embroidered with pure gold.
And I laugh and sour into the sky - I cannot believe this myself.

Come just a little closer, allow me to touch your feathers....
Every night I see the mountains, and every night I wake up blind.
Your sleeves are embroidered with silk, my queen, like the sky is embroidered with moonlight.
Carry me away, northern winds, into that land of pain and dreams.
How painful it is to know, that all has happened not to you and not to me,
And that the time did not slow down to peak into the carved window.
It was you, my joy, whom I dreamed about every night, but you are clothed by sorrow,
And I, of course, will sing one last time, but I will leave your house with the break of dawn.

Wandering somewhere out there are your dreams, my queen,
How long before the spring filled with ancient greens?
And all that is left is to repeat just those few words - such few words -
Wake up, my queen, put on your feathers....

Would I be the one not to know, that all has happened not to me and not to you?
And your kindness cuts me deeper than an arrow from the bow,
You pay for my song with a full moon, like others pay with a golden coin,
And I would give up all to be with you, but maybe you do not exist at all....
You pay for my song with a full moon, like others pay with a golden coin,
And I would give up all to be with you, but maybe you do not exist at all....
My queen....






Wednesday, December 7, 2011

Город, Которого Нет (Игорь Корнелюк) / The City, That Doesn't Exist (Igor Kornelyuk)

It has been a while since I really wanted to do a song.... But this one keeps bugging me.

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Город, Которого Нет (Игорь Корнелюк) / The City, That Doesn't Exist (Igor Kornelyuk)




Russian version

Ночь и тишина, данная навек
Дождь, а может быть падает снег
Все равно бесконечной надеждой согрет
Я вдали вижу город, которого нет...

Где легко найти страннику приют,
Где наверняка помнят и ждут,
День за днем, то теряя, то путая след,
Я иду в этот город, которого нет

Там для меня горит очаг,
Как вечный знак забытых истин,
Мне до него - последний шаг,
И этот шаг длиннее жизни...

Кто ответит мне, что судьбой дано,
Пусть об этом знать не суждено,
Может быть, за порогом растраченных лет
Я найду этот город, которого нет...

Там для меня горит очаг,
Как вечный знак забытых истин,
Мне до него - последний шаг,
И этот шаг длиннее жизни...


Word-for-word translation

Night and silence are given forever,
It is raining, or maybe it is snowing.
Nevertheless, endless hope keeps me warm.
In the distance I see the city, that doesn't exist

Where a traveler will easily find a place,
Where they of course still remember and wait.
Day after day, always losing the path,
I am walking toward the city that doesn't exist

Where there is a small fire is being kept for me,
Like a timeless symbol of forgotten truth.
That city is only a step away,
But that step has been longer than life.

Who will tell me, what the fate has in store for me,
Maybe I will never find out.
Maybe, beyond the door of my wasted years
I will find that city, which doesn't exist.


Where there is a small fire is being kept for me,
Like a timeless symbol of forgotten truth.
That city is only a step away,
But that step has been longer than life.


My re-worked version:

Silence and night are with me again,
Snow keeps falling down, or a freezing rain,
But my hope like a star still persists -
Far away I see city, that doesn't exist.

City, where a wayfarer can find a place,
Someone who waits for him, who knows his face;
This is why through the sharp and freezing mist
I keep walking to the city that doesn't exist.

There a hearth fire is kept alive,
A timeless symbol lost today.
This city is a step away -
A step that is longer, than my life.

Maybe I will lose my path again,
My wasted years like drops of rain.
But my hope like a star still persists -
I will find this city that doesn't exist.

There a hearth fire is kept alive,
A timeless symbol lost today.
This city is a step away -
A step that is longer, than my life.

Sunday, August 14, 2011

МакСим "Ветром Стать" / MakSim "To become the wind" - Draft 1 translation

This is the second Russian song I attempted to translate. It is one of my recent favorites.


I did not care for this official video clip. And the video's translation was so-so.

My true-to-the-song translation:

When I die, I will become the Wind
And live on the roof of your home.
When you die, you will become the Sun
And you will rise above me, once again
Like an Autumn breeze, I will fly
With you wherever you go
You won't hear it when I whisper quietly
"My Sun, where are you?" 

Chorus:
But please don't be the Sun quiet yet, you hear me?
I will sing you my songs from your roof
I will become that what you breathe once again - 
All that is left is for me to become the Wind
I will wait just for your smiles
I will listen only to your CDs
I will blow snowflakes from your eyelashes -
All that is left is for me to become the Wind

When I die, I will become the Wind,
Falling on the ground with the snow,
I will laugh, flying next to you wherever you go
And I will be the happiest in this world
When you die, you will become the Sun
And you will melt my frosts,
And mimosas will blossom in the orchards,
And the icicles in my heart will turn to tears.


Draft 1 of my "Americanized" translation

Hey, when I die, I will become the Wind
And live right near you in a tree
And when you die, you will become the Sun
And, once again, you will rise above me.
Like Autumn wind, I will be always near
Fall at your feel, like morning dew
Can you hear? I whisper gently in your ear:
"My Sun, where are you? My Sun, where are you?"

Chorus:
But please, don't hurry yet to become my Sun
Listen, I will sings songs to you until dawn,
Fell, with the air you breath I will be one,
Now all that's left is to become the Wind.
From your eyelashes I will blow the snowflakes,
Dance to the sounds that your heart makes,
Carry your songs above the woods and lakes..
Now all that is left is to become the Wind.


Hey, when I die, I will become the Breeze,
And fall on the ground with the snow.
I will kiss your lips, your face with ease,
You will be my only joy, you know?
When you die, you will become the Sun
And melt my snows like my fears
And when first flowers spring on your lawn
The icicles in my heart will turn to tears.

Chorus:
But please, don't hurry yet to become my Sun
Listen, I will sings songs to you until dawn,
Fell, with the air you breath I will be one,
Now all that's left is to become the Wind.
From your eyelashes I will blow the snowflakes,
Dance to the sounds that your heart makes,
Carry your songs above the woods and lakes..
Now all that is left is to become the Wind.




 I will need to adjust the translation to fit the rhythm of the song better, but I will wait to do it once my throat is better and I can actually try to sing my translated version.