Thursday, September 22, 2011

My Joy - BI-2 / Счастье Мое, БИ-2 - Redone, First draft

I finished  the first draft in a couple of hours last night. It came to be out a lot further from the original text that I would like to see, so I will need to keep scratching my head for a bit to find a way to work at least the best parts of the discarded original into the English version.


My Joy (BI-2)
1. Bright flames become ashes,
2. Day into night crashes,
3. I watch through my eyelashes.
4. Only the wind knew
5. All that was once true
6. My joy, where are you?


7.  Crystals are like tears
8. And after all the years
9. What does my heart fears?
10. Night is almost through
11. Ending the world I knew.
12. My joy, where are you?


13. And I again try
14. Fly like you could fly
15. Right to the edge of the skies.
16. Night is almost through
17. Ending the world I knew
18. My joy, where are you?

My... joy... my... joy... my... my... my.... joy...
My... joy... my... joy... my... my... my.... joy...
My... joy... my... joy...




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